Part 57

I picked my way through the extraordinary: a
submerged caldera (the volcano still hot, still
alive, deep within), a white ship squeezing

through the throat of the isthmus (bemused
waters forced to join hands), monasteries
perched high on rock-pillars (getting close,

as close as they can), an open-air cinema (the
screen, incongruous, between a low-hanging
moon and the yellow-lit acropolis). But then,

many afternoons later, what I remember is
the song of invisible cicadas on the trail up
to the Parthenon, the pink glow of sunsets

painting lesser hilltops, the silence of Sounion,
even the sea only a whisper, and all those
pillars standing in the ruins like broken arms

reaching for the blue stillness. Because memory
resides in the ordinary. Little things. That were.
Little things. That weren’t. What I never saw.

What wasn’t there. What was supposed to
be there. Absence is recollected as a solid
object. With contours and texture. With skin.

A vacant temple. A leafless tree. An echo in
an empty amphitheatre. A story with parts
missing. Running in an infinite loop. Running

out of time. A family without people. Photos
face down in a frame. Eternity. A daughter’s
palm long held open to an unresponsive sky.

(Athens /The Peloponnese/ Meteora, Greece)

23 thoughts on “Part 57

  1. I’m reminded of the ancient Greek mythology. “Legends were written about a treacherous area at sea where sailors would find themselves stuck between Scylla, a monstrous multi-headed beast atop a cliff, and Charybdis, an enormous whirlpool.”
    This is a change of writing technics for you, Raj?
    ..

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    1. Thanks Jim? Didn’t consciously try a different technique.. been writing about several travel experiences, hopefully they’ve emerged with their own story in different ways!!! Glad this one triggered memories of an interesting myth!!

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    1. Thanks so much, Rosemary! Greece was just a powerful experience. But also just before I reached Athens there was that awful wildfire in which many lives were lost. (Almost cancelled the trip) This year too, it seems climate change is wreaking havoc. Hope people are safe… more importantly, hope there is some climate action that counts.

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  2. Very descriptive I can see it all in front of me and can hear the cicadas. We have them here too at the end of a summer. My favourite line “ruins like broken arms reaching for the blue stillness.

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  3. “…Because memory
    resides in the ordinary. Little things. That were.
    Little things. That weren’t. What I never saw.

    What wasn’t there. What was supposed to
    be there. Absence is recollected as a solid
    object. ..”

    A perfect recollection of how landscape becomes memory. The thing that can’t be becoming poetry. So fine, Rajani.

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  4. I’ve said it often, but good things are worth repeating–you are an imagery goddess. Your words always take me to new places and remind me of places I’ve visited… and miss. I love what this poem says about memory, about what matters, about what we get to keep.

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  5. Beautiful and evocative, Rajani, with both Italian and Greek vibes, as well as a deeper sense of longing. The last two stanzas especially really spoke to me. Hope you are well!

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  6. “What wasn’t there. What was supposed to
    be there. Absence is recollected as a solid
    object. With contours and texture. With skin.”

    This really stayed with me.
    This piece of writing is one of your best poems.

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