What if — I hold the words like a pashmina
cloak to hide my nakedness from the mirror.
It is a trick. What if — no longer a question,
no longer an argument: a finality, a surrender,
a road that has taken too long. What if a
father thought to hold my hand. What if a
mother knew how to care. What if there was
always a way to begin again. What are the
odds it would have still led to this moment,
to this poem? What if the sea came looking
for the river. What if the river was dry? What
if the rain had a choice? What are the odds
a home would still be home? That home? What
if forgiveness was taught in the same cadence
as multiplication tables. Twelve times nine.
Four times twenty-seven. Three times broken.
Five times whole. Life by rote. What if birth
came with a warranty. What if death were
optional. What if families were made like
solar systems: orbiting around a single
shining light, till the end. What if the naked
person in the mirror is actually someone
else? What if this poem had a fucking choice.
Haha. Great!
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Thank you, Pablo.
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I am so glad you had no ‘fucking choice’ but to write this poem. Because, like you, the poem is stunning.
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That’s very kind, Cindy. Thanks so much. At some point, we just accept that there were many forks in the road and we just took the road we could. And arrived where we should. No matter what. Then it stops mattering. I think 🙂
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“I hold the words like a pashmina cloak to hide my nakedness…” Beautiful.
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Thanks so much, Madhuri. So glad you stopped by to read.
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What if no one existed to read this poem, what if everyone read it, the entire story? I think we would be changed, at least by seeing more. And what then? Thank you for this zinger of a poem.
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Thanks so much, Susan. The writing has changed me… as for people who might read it in its entirety… I hope it tells them something about ordinary people and ordinary stories and how things have meaning….
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Compelling prose about the “what ifs”. We hope to arrive where we should but how does one ever truly know.
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Thank you, Maria.
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The questions you pose never cease to amaze …. you ended with a zinger!!!!! Love this.
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Thanks so much, Helen.
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Great questions and closure. I think reality is a spectrum!
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Thanks Colleen… interesting that reality may not be one thing but a spectrum…
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I like your “what if’s”, Raj, Rhetorical, of course. Do they take your pashmina away and slap your hand if they find a person’s pashmina?
I came here this morning with my smart phone but google wouldn’t let me post. I’m trying tonight, crossed my fingers.
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There’s a city named What If and another named If Only — powerfully gloomy places where nothing gets done and there are mirrors on every city square. The counting in this poem is feral and its addition hopelessly resulting in the same plain facts in the mirror of one’s history.
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True.. the rhetorical what-ifs are gloomy places to be.. hence their transition in the poem from questions to statements… sort of like an acceptance of forks in the road.
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Brilliant!
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Thanks so much, Kim.
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Wow, this is a stunning poem, and I totally get all the what if’s, which you word so brilliantly. What if someone reads this poem and it really really helps them on their path? I think that is a very real possibility.
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Thank you, Sherry. That is such a kind thought. I hope someone does read this and the whole story and finds something that resonates and helps them… even if they never tell me about it, it would still mean something.
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“What if forgiveness was taught in the same cadence
as multiplication tables. “ : This is great. How many times can we forgive until it loses its meaning?
“What if” is always a frightening question.
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Indeed frightening…so at some point we leave the question behind and accept that choices were made or were forced to be made… thanks Lee San.
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Let’s not talk of what ifs. They are unfortunately never there. Let’s begin now again without going back. Life does not give a clean slate. You just have to rewrite your own story.
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So true…that’s why I wrote that the what-ifs are no longer questions…. thank you, GC.
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You hit me to the core and I’m left to think many thoughts I’ve to come back again . This is so…. deep
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Thanks so much, Jossina.
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I suspect they are the best poems, the ones that are pulled out of us with no fucking choice.
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True that.. I included this quote in the book review I posted a few days ago “Would you like to know a certain thing about poetry? Every line is a collaboration with ‘higher forces’ and a poet is doing very well if he acts as a good secretary.” – by the Russian poet Marina Tsvetayeva. Some poems are that!
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The “no choice” poems are the true stories.
This is wonderful, Rajani.
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Thanks so much, Sara 🙂
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