Some twenty years since I spoke to my
mother. It still feels like a cold, rainy
December that will never end. The chill
creeping up from the marble floor, the
damp seeping in through the walls and
that incessant drumbeat on concrete and
tile, like a foreboding. It was her way: a
monsoon sky, overcome by persistent
cloud. An umbilical cord is not designed to
be an enduring bond. The womb is not the
guarantor of expectation. When you first
learn about disappointment, when you
first realize nothing is certain, when you
first encounter the taste of misgiving, the
days grow a mouldy, chemical flavour.
Doubt becomes a halo around your frame.
A chalk outline where you fell and never
got up. There are pretty myths about
unconditional love. There should be stories
about ordinary estrangement. The eclipse of
affection. The way water does not think of
itself as wet. The way the grey sky congeals
as it descends further. The way light does
not always see. The way good and bad are
forgotten in different ways. The way some
mornings you wake up, red-eyed and sore,
still curled up tight, in that foetal position.
Sadly, I can relate to that never-ending chill. I think my lifelong hatred and fear of cold is because I felt so little warmth from my mother.
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Yes… it stays. And stays. Very sadly. I think in Part 6, I called it ‘the leash that no one holds’ ….
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The profound sadness of estrangement communicates powerfully here. Some beautiful imagery carries the sense of pain sustained across the years so well – a deep, engrained cold that never yields.
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Thank you, Dick. Appreciate your kind comment. These were hard to write.
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Deeply touching
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Thanks so much.
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I LOVE this chalk line where you fell and never got up… ordinary estrangements and water that doesn’t think of itself as wet.
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Thank you, Colleen.
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The “chalk line” is perfection. Each of your descriptors in this piece are profound, both heartbreaking and yet somehow beautiful.
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Thanks so much, Maria. Appreciate your comment.
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“An umbilical cord is not designed to
be an enduring bond. The womb is not the
guarantor of expectation.”
Heartbreakingly true, all of it. But these lines. Life and certain relationships can be a terrible shock, especially when we are told how things should be… and then find out that “should” and “are” live in different realities.
Beautifully hard. Terribly relatable. Real.
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“Should” and “are”… yes, indeed. Thank you, Magaly. I have a bag of hugs for everyone who feels this resonates because of their own experience.
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Sending you a bag of hugs right back. 🙂
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🙂
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I always valued the time that I would spend late, late at night after the others were sleeping. It was then that she would inspect and clean blemishes on the day’s egg crop. With over a hundred hens, there were a bunch of eggs. I really wasn’t much help but we both valued the time spent together. On Sunday evenings after the eggs, she would count the offerings gotten at the morning and evening before. I was done in and went to bed.
Thank you for tickling my memory to remind me of our time spent.
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Some women are wired for motherhood; others, for reasons of history or biology, are not. The mystery of it is scoured here. “It was her way: a / monsoon sky, overcome by persistent / cloud. An umbilical cord is not designed to / be an enduring bond. The womb is not the / guarantor of expectation.” Or exaltation. The loss of that is achingly calibrated here. “There are pretty myths about /
unconditional love. There should be stories / about ordinary estrangement.” We get one now, and the greyness is defining.
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Thank you, Brendan. Appreciate your kind comment. 🙏 I didn’t think I could write these last two poems… but there they are!
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There should be more stories like the ones you mentioned. They might come too late for the child who struggles to understand why everything feels so wrong, but they would be solace for when we try to put ourselves back together as adults.
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True.. thank you. Maybe someone who reads this series some day will find some validation and know there is a way.
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This is so moving, Rajani. I loved best the lines Brendan quotes and also “There should be stories / about ordinary estrangement. The eclipse of /
affection. The way water does not think of itself as wet.” Your brilliant choice of words takes this poem to another level. Really wonderful writing.
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Thanks for your kind words, Sherry. Much appreciated.
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Your description of estrangement is chillingly accurate. Your chapters are riveting, this one especially so.
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Thanks so much, Helen.
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A hard poem to write and no doubt a harder experience to bear. Well done for finding a way to bring it forth.
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Thank you, Paul. Yes to both… but am glad it has words now. It’s one way out of the dark.
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Or one way back in? There is the rub right? Hard places to go but perhaps there is where the poetic gold dwells.
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Oh yes.. poetry has roots in very dark places.. one just has to read between the lines to find it!
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Such masterful use of language and imagery. chalk lines, water, light.
“There should be stories
about ordinary estrangement. “ : I am sure there are many, waiting for a master storyteller to tell.
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Thanks so much, Lee San. Glad you liked it.
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You have articulated so well a pain beyond description. The feelings, the imagery, the language ….wonderful
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Thanks so much, Jossina.
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A wonderfully wise and sensory poem, Rajani. Love these lines especially:
“An umbilical cord is not designed to
be an enduring bond.”
“There are pretty myths about
unconditional love. There should be stories
about ordinary estrangement.”
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Thank you, Sunra.
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“There should be stories
about ordinary estrangement. The eclipse of
affection. “….Oh! This is so heartbreaking! Hope ‘unconditional love’ never becomes ‘pretty myths’. But in reality this also happens. What experiences the poor souls must have gone through. Your lines are always a mirror to the world where reality reflects. Thanks for participating Rajani, with this brilliant poem.
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Thanks so much, Sumana. This is from my poetic memoir series that I wrote all of last year. Hard to write, but had to be written.
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An honest and open poem, really expresses the pain of estrangement so very well. It took my breath away.
“The womb is not the
guarantor of expectation. ”
So true. Birth into this world does not always mean a lifelong relationship…as much as one would hope for it.
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Thanks so much, Mary. Appreciate your kind comment.
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A brave poem about the other side of motherhood. So well written. I was moved by the same lines as before: “there should be stories about ordinary estrangement” and “the way water does not think of itself as wet.” I ache for the child who felt her mother’s lack of love to give.
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Thank you, Sherry.
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“Doubt becomes a halo around your frame.
A chalk outline where you fell and never
got up. There are pretty myths about
unconditional love. There should be stories
about estrangement. ” Reading this poem immerses me in a situation that was never mine, but i feel it, and yearn to mother that child even as she is grown. Unfortunately, I understand this estrangement is ordinary, and it alters what could be. My Mom is with me now, but she abandoned me from when I was 20 to 40, and I grew a shell of angry determination–I CAN DO IT ALL MYSELF, GRR. And the forgetting, the not seeing the self, the waking in a self-protective curl all speak to me. Brilliant, hard, sharp- edged poem.
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Thank you, Susan. I can relate to that shell of angry determination… though what other choice is there in such situations? Am glad you made your peace and are now the caregiver instead. Not everyone finds it in their hearts to forgive and move forward.
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Doubt can be a halo we cannot get out from under. So many lines in this piece rang true; I can’t begin to repeat them all. Well done.
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Thanks so much, Yvonne.
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