That time, alone, without a phone, hungry, afraid, the rain
beating down for three days straight, flooded streets like
prison moats. The Bay of Bengal, was dumping her angst
with unnerving ferocity. Water stood a foot deep outside
the gate. I was told when I was young that happiness is a
constant. We all get an equal share. I didn’t know then that
to grow up is to cling to false hope with a fist larger than a
child’s. But this is an ordinary story, there is no great feat of
survival. No heart-warming rescue. No heroics. No hero. Just
the being. Just the waiting. Just the terrifying nights. Just
the numbness of morning. Just the eventual ceasing of the
rain. Like a truth. Without reason. Like a mirror that swallows
reflections. The rain became my monster. The rain became
my foe. The rain became the hell I could not conquer. A
drizzle was a deluge. A deluge, the dark of an endless night.
The monsoon, an affliction without remedy. These are tests
I cannot pass. Tests I cannot fail. Always the same result.
Always the same consequence. Happiness is a constant.
Brilliant. I need your rain badly. But I won’t get it. The world apparently doesn’t revolve around us.
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Thank you, Cindy. That’s so true, isn’t it. It totally doesn’t. Wish it didn’t have to keep finding new ways to prove its point though. 🙂
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These last few years, we here have become very familiar with just such a monster / foe. Now there is always an undercurrent of alarm.
Happiness a constant, with everyone getting an equal share? I can’t see that.
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Yeah, I can’t either. But I did believe it for a long time until it broke wide open….
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How readily we believe what we are told!
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Comforting, maybe, to young minds – like fairytales 🙂 Then we grow up!!!
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I am struck by “to grow up is to cling to false hope with a fist larger than a child’s.” This is a remarkable poem, Rajani. Am glad “happiness is a constant.”
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Thank you, Sherry, so glad you picked that line. It would have been a fairer world if happiness had been a constant… I think it is skewed literally and every way else!! 🙂
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Rains like that wash away everything that weren’t sturdy to begin with, like old comforting lies. The part about tests that can’t be passed or failed sticks with me. I think there is a way to pass tests like that, but it seldom looks pretty. Instead of a heroic training/ running montage it looks more like dragging oneself on broken legs, inch by inch, until you can get a finger to touch the finish line.
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You’re right, Rommy. Thank you for that insightful comment. There are good days, when one feels progress has been made and others when the finish line has moved or was only a mirage in the first place.
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A deluge, the dark of an endless night.
The monsoon, an affliction without remedy.
The monsoon never varies, it comes sudden and tragic even when it is expected. We are bracing for it too! Enjoyed very much your skillful write, Rajani!
Hank
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Thanks so much 🙂
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Rain can do that. I’ve never been in a monsoon, but just a couple days of endless downpour can be an affliction. I really like the middle stanzas, the happiness of a child, we try to grab it with a fist but it is elusive. A well written piece.
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Thank you, Yvonne.
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Endless rain is a potent metaphor for the powerful force that life is, moving in whatever ways it does. We, are blessed to be in the mix, but it is most definitely not about us. Another wonderful piece of writing.
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Thanks so much, Paul.
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It’s raining here now AND I have the flu so this describes how I feel meeting this monster. But is happiness a constant?
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Of course not! But would be nice, if it were 🙂 Thank you Colleen!!!
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A brilliant poem Rajani, goes from the specific to the sublime.
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Thanks so much, Kim.
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I keep coming back to this line ~~ I was told when I was young that happiness is a constant. We all get an equal share. I didn’t know then that
to grow up is to cling to false hope with a fist larger than a
child’s ~~ I have experienced horrific flooding, the memory never fades.
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Yes, the memory never fades, especially if one was traumatised by it…. thanks for visiting, Helen.
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If the “story” holds an umbrella up against a separation, the deluge in this installment seems a conspiracy by the Bay of Bengal to make that matter worse, whether as an episode of that separation or a metaphor for the sundering of a happinesss. Growing up for me started somewhere about the point that I realized that happiness wasn’t getting what I wanted but rather wanting what I had. And it wasn’t just a feeling …
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I didn’t write the rain as a metaphor, but I can see how it serves that purpose well, in an extrapolated context, given the story. And what you speak of is perhaps the best lesson…contentment. Some end up taking the long and not so scenic route to get there. Or don’t. Am glad you saw that early, Brendan. Thank you.
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I didn’t see it til I sobered up. Long road there and it would have killed me if didn’t come to understand it.
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Glad it is behind you and you have the joy of earthweal and poetry now!
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Just a note, I’ve been collecting these chapters during my blogging break. I’m planning to read them all at once. Since I alluded to the book… 🙂
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Oh great! Will look forward to your thoughts once you do a binge read! Part 20 is kind of the end of whatever it was…lets call in Chapter 1, a shifting of gears after this … so Parts 1 to 20 read together would work, I think! (About the book though…. 🙂 )
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Brilliant! Thank you for this reading guide. I’ll surely share my thoughts… 🙂
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Such an incredible quiet clarity here. Like the silence after the rain. Beautiful.
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Thanks so much for the kind comment, Lindi.
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Loved the imagery in the poem.
Sometimes it’s helpless to know that there are things that we cannot interfere in, and control, like the monsoons.
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Thanks so much. Yes you just have to endure until it gives way.
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The other day I was saying to the Husband that we weren’t simply having false hope that we will actually have a rainy season. It’s been 11 years of drought for us. I like your poem. Your imagery is strong and vivid.
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Thank you… 11 years is a lot, weather’s gone wonky everywhere …sigh!
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“Like a mirror that swallows
reflections.”
Just one line in many of vivid imagery.
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Thanks so much, Sara.
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You describe this wonderfully, Rajani. The ceaseless unending torture of it. The simple powerful lines.
“Just the waiting. Just the terrifying nights. Just
the numbness of morning. Just the eventual ceasing of the
rain. Like a truth. Without reason. Like a mirror that swallows
reflections. The rain became my monster.”
Stunning.
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Thank you, Sunra. Appreciate your support very much.
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It was a pleasure to come across your work!
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