Bolts of silk and brocade, young women,
ornate silver jhumkas flashing as they
shook their heads, hennaed hands and
curly long hair, one holding up a swathe of
peacocks spun in gold and twilight blue to
her breast, another draping fiery orange,
the colour of a star in heat, around a slender
waist, the beginning of a giggle, hugging,
so much touching, an older woman, a
mother, an aunt, clutching a sequinned
purse, the air thick with chemicals and
anticipation, bangles jangling as dreams
awaken in sensuous mulberry pink. Looking
through a shop window into that many-hued
ache, I straightened the years that had fallen
on their sides like plastic dominoes. It might
have been nice, like that, the adults indulgent,
youth, somewhat innocent, somewhat lewd,
thrusting hips and limbs against softness,
life’s probability ratios worked out by the
length of a zipper, the transparency of fabric
and a familiar call in a stranger’s eyes. It could
have been like that. A maroon-brown saree
with zari borders for a willing bride. The motif
of celebration. Of auspicious starts. It should
have been like that. They say the longest night
is woven in bitter yarn: black warp, black weft.
You bring it all to life so beautifully!
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Thank you… 🙏
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I love the poem. I can see the women, the colours, the smiles, feel the excitement of dressing for a wedding or event……love the photo, too!
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Thanks so much, Sherry.
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I have never been to an Indian wedding….but I have seen movies and they look like a lot of colourful fun. Enjoyed your poem
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Thank you Rall.
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A feast for soul and senses. I enjoyed the connections, these people care about each other and that’s always so wonderful to witness. And I love this phrase: “the colour of a star in heat”.
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Thank you Magaly… intense, happy, connected- that’s quite a good way to live life- if possible….
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If possible…
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Such cultural richness; a beautiful and delightful poem!
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Thank you, Khaya.
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I’m really glad I read this one and the previous one back to back. This does feel like an expansion of the feelings in the first one. Life and all of its activity are so joyfully and gloriously described, but there’s still the feeling of being haunted. Though this time it’s a haunting by thoughts of what could have been.
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What could have been is a cross we bear… even when you set it down, a phantom remains… Thanks Rommy, very glad to have your keen eye over these writings.
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Most every young lady has a beautiful wedding in mine. I wished for your heroine to have her dreams about one come true and felt badly for her. Both my daughters had nice weddings as did Mrs. Jim and I. My first wife and I eloped but we did find a church. Two ladies having choir practice took time out to be our witnesses. I don’t think any of her next weddings were a big affair either. I wasn’t in invited.
How about you and yours?
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Thank you Jim… your empathy is appreciated. Love your travel tales including this elopement one!!
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“in mind”, not “in mine”. Sorry.
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A beautiful, wistful poem Rajani. So well written – as you have worked through this sequence, your poetry has matured to a brilliance that can be startling.
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Thank you, Kim. Appreciate your kind comment.
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This brought tears to my eyes, Rajani. Maybe the cosmos rewards our suffering such disappointments by giving us rich imaginations. I wish it could have been so ❤
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Thank you Lisa. Your empathy is greatly appreciated. I hope, as you say, the cosmos believes in balancing things out and then gives us the ability to recognize that balance.
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You’re welcome.
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Wonderfully woven words, Rajani!
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Thank you, Ingrid. 🙂
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The scene you painted is so beautifully alive and luscious, in more ways than one. I really like the imagery details of the celebration in the poem.
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Thanks so much 🙂
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Since lyric has only I and a Thou for a subject, the past is jar filled with so many spices grown redolent with time. Going through past rooms with the imagination is like dreaming but has more will to it, more control: “Looking
through a shop window into that many-hued / ache, I straightened the years that had fallen / on their sides like plastic dominoes” as well as narrative corrections: “it might have been nice,” “it could have been like that” and “it should have been like that” in the dance of one’s elder logos and youthful eros. Infinite yearning here in the lush weave of color and scent, measured by “life’s probability ratios worked out by the / length of a zipper, the transparency of fabric/ and a familiar call in a stranger’s eyes.” The window however remains intact and the poem is better for it.. Great stuff Rajani – Brendan (PS, the hurricane passed close but not too close. Happy to keep it “might have been”)
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So glad you weren’t in the direct path of Ian. And thanks for your kind comment. I like what you say about reimagining the past being like dreaming but with better control!!
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What do zari borders look like, please? The rest of the scene is so visual. (I like that.)
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Thanks Priscilla. Zari is thread, typically gold or silver, that is woven into the fabric creating beautiful motifs- both contemporary and traditional. A bride would normally have a whole lot of zari in her wedding attire. Hope that helps!
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It does, thank you!
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Love this line, in particular:
“Looking
through a shop window into that many-hued
ache, I straightened the years that had fallen
on their sides like plastic dominoes.”
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Thanks so much, Sara.
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This is wonderfully evocative, Rajani. I, too, so often turn to reverie, to how it might have been, or could have been…..sigh. Wonderfully written. I could see the women in all their finery.
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Thank you, Sherry. Glad the imagery came through!
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